Why Lemony?
(the “About Me” page)

March 30, 2006


Happy Birthday to Billy,
you live in a silly
house with three little girls
and your wife and two other grown-ups.

Uh..let's try that again.

Happy Birthday to my sweetie
I'm glad it's sunny, not sleety
Such a beautiful spring day
to celebrate your birthday.

Ok, the meter on that one is messed up, but rhyming poems are not my speciality.

Posted by Bahiyyih at March 30, 2006 01:05 PM

The second poem is 4/5 of a lymeric. It's like telling a joke and then stopping just short of the punchline. So to patch things up, how about: "So for you, I turned off the heat-y" or something...

Posted by: Nathan at March 31, 2006 09:14 AM

That works! Thanks Nathan.

Posted by: Billy at March 31, 2006 01:47 PM